My favourite sport is soccer. I was born in Gisborne. In my family and it's me my brother Blake my mum and my dad. I love my family; they are so nice.
My school is Makauri. It is the best school in the world.
Friday, 8 June 2018
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Hi Jack, This is a great and creative post you have up here. How long did you take to write this? I took about one hour to write and publish my First profile on my blog. This is good information about yourself and it is also just personal which is great.
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Claire Hopper
Kia ora, I am Thomas from Te Hapara School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the information that you used in your writing and you did a really great job of making a pirate ship by only using shapes...I think it’s amazing!
I learnt that you are a fan of soccer and that you think that Makauri School is the best in the world.
Maybe you could add some more writing into your Profile but otherwise it was great.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href=https://thsthomasd.blogspot.com/
Kia ora Jack I like your blog and how you put all of your family in. I also like football as well.
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Riley